My wonderings?

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by soaring eagle (flying high again!) on Friday, 08-Feb-2008 13:45:07

Okay my first try hope y'all like it.

My wonderings.

If it could happen, take away my feelings,
If it could happen, take away my fears.
If it could happen, stop me from feeling love,
If it could happen, somehow stop the tears.

If it could happen, I don’t want to care,
If it could happen, no cross I want to bare.
If it could happen, I don’t want to feel,
If it could happen, I just don’t want to deal.

If it could happen, I would make a change,
If it could happen, Things I would re-arrange.
But its not meant to happen, so let me be,
Cause I am tired of being broken, so it will be just me.

If it could happen, I wish to figure this out,
If it could happen, I would know what its all about
But it just won’t happen, so we will leave it alone,
And may be in time, somehow everything will be Known.

So for now be my friend,
And I will be loyal till the end.
Cause may be in time things will mend,
And just may be I will smile again.

Post 2 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Saturday, 09-Feb-2008 21:50:49

very good, keep it up.

It's your first, huh?

Post 3 by SunshineAndRain (I'm happily married, a mom of two and a fulltime college student.) on Wednesday, 23-Apr-2008 5:52:30

Nice. Definitely, keep it up.

Post 4 by Musical Ambition (I've got the gold prolific poster award, now is there a gold cup for me?) on Wednesday, 23-Apr-2008 10:27:54

This is your first piece you posted onto the boards, right? I've read a couple of other things from you, so I didn't think this was your first piece of writing.

Anyway, this is good. You really get a sense of emotion while reading it. You can really feel the person's pain. Good job.

Post 5 by YankeeFanForLife! (Picapiedra: king of the boards!) on Wednesday, 23-Apr-2008 11:37:32

Nice dude.